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The graph below show the internet usage in toronto city from different age groups.

The graph below show the internet usage in toronto city from different age groups. BwQxX
The provided bar graph illustrates how much portion of people who belong to different age group were used the internet during the given time period in Toronto. Overall, the noteworthy aspect is that youngsters were much interested in the uses of social sites than children and older. On having a cursory glance, it is crystal clear that the percentage of tender age was 53 in 1998 which was followed by second year with 45% for using online data. It was also remained almost same in 2000. Surprisingly, the percentile of children was negligible in 1998, 8% and 9% in 1999 and 2000 respectively who had interest in net. Proceeding further, the ratio of senior citizen was twofold more in 1999 from its previous year which was constituted 4% and 8%. noticeably, one in ten percentage of about 50 age group of individuals were noticed in 2000. conversely, 41%, 39% and 37% of people from 31 to 50 age group were used to the websites.
The provided bar graph illustrates how much portion of
people
who belong to
different
age
group were
used
the internet during the
given
time period in Toronto.

Overall
, the noteworthy aspect is that youngsters were much interested in the
uses
of social sites than children and older.

On
having a cursory glance, it is crystal
clear
that the percentage of tender
age
was 53 in 1998 which
was followed
by second year with 45% for using online data. It was
also
remained almost same in 2000.
Surprisingly
, the percentile of children was negligible in 1998, 8% and 9% in 1999 and 2000
respectively
who had interest in net.

Proceeding
further
, the ratio of senior citizen was twofold more in 1999 from its previous year which
was constituted
4% and 8%.
noticeably
, one in ten percentage of about 50
age
group of individuals
were noticed
in 2000.
conversely
, 41%, 39% and 37% of
people
from 31 to 50
age
group were
used
to the websites.
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