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The given charts presented different types of initiatives for households that can sink by inundation even after ten decades.

The given charts presented different types of initiatives for households that can sink by inundation even after ten decades. nXDBP
The given charts presented different types of initiatives for households which can sink by inundation even after 10 decades. Overall, a strong strategy is a must to save a home from water surges. Although a stopbank can hold flood till 100 years, a dweller can still avoid the water by raising the building. An essential precaution for inhabitants is a high raised stopbank instilled beside the river or drain area. Its structure contains a berm and a floodgate. Especially the freeboard section is important, which can hold the water even in the distant future and create blockage for internal runoff, such as rainwater. On the other hand, if the stopbank is unavailable, individuals can still make their belongings safe by building homes 300mm up from the ground. This method also needs a freeboard protecting the house for the next ten decades. Even though the flood would enter the area, but people can take shelter at their homes till the water comes down.
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different
types of initiatives for households which can sink by inundation even after 10 decades.

Overall
, a strong strategy is a
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must to
save a home from
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water
surges. Although a
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stopbank
can hold flood till 100 years, a dweller can
still
avoid the
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water
by raising the building.

An essential precaution for inhabitants is a
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high raised
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stopbank
instilled beside the river or drain area. Its structure contains a berm and a floodgate.
Especially
the freeboard section is
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important
, which can hold the
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water
even in the distant future and create blockage for internal runoff, such as rainwater.

On the other hand
, if the
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stopbank
is unavailable, individuals can
still
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make
their belongings safe by building homes
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300mm
up from the ground. This method
also
needs a freeboard protecting the
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house
for the
next
ten decades.
Even though
the flood would enter the area,
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but
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people
can take shelter at their homes till the
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water
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comes
down.
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IELTS academic The given charts presented different types of initiatives for households that can sink by inundation even after ten decades.

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162 words
6.0
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