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the graph below show the coffee production in 4 countries in1990 to 2010

the graph below show the coffee production in 4 countries in1990 to 2010 kWWL8
The graph demonstrates how many coffee productions have been produced in four countries over the course of four year starting in 1990 According to the graph, it immidiately obivous that coffee productions experiences an upward trend with the exception of Colombia. Brazil registers the highest figures over the period researched. Almost countries have an imtermidiate coffee productions which in Indonesia, Vietnam. However the most coffee has been being produced in Brazil which is about 0. 7 million tones in 1990. This figure keep increase significantly in 2010 that is nearly 2 million tone. In addition, Indonesia also motivate the product to 0. 4 tone Follow by Brazil, Colombia is the only country has diminish the coffee productions from 0. 6 million tone in 1990 to 0. 4 tone in 2000. This figure decrease gradually in 2010 which is about 0. 3 tone. Beside that, Vietnam has grown up the product step by step, being between 0. 1 millon tone in 1990 and nearly 0. 4 millon tone in 2010
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