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The graph below show data of CFC emission in four countries between 1994 and 2006

The graph below show data of CFC emission in four countries between 1994 and 2006 0n6kQ
The given line graph represents the emission of Chloro Fluoro Carbon (CFC) in the Turkey, Switzerland, Brazil, and Indonesia during 1994 to 2006. Overall, Brazil emit highest among all the three countries, while it become least producer at the end of 2006. According to graph, in 1994, Brazil discharge 6000 metric tonnes of CFC in the atmosphere, which is highest among all. After that, it fell down to 3700 approximately. Between 2000 and 2006, the number is reduce significantly from about 2200 to less than 100. The Turkey and Switzerland also had CFC emission level at 3000 and 2000, which show no change till 2000. After that it end up nearly 1500 and 1000. There was a dramatic decline in emission of CFC in Indonesia from 4300 to 1000 metric tonnes during 1994 and 2000. However, it increase gradually around 1200 metric tonnes in 2006
The
given
line graph represents the emission of
Chloro
Fluoro
Carbon (CFC) in the Turkey, Switzerland, Brazil, and Indonesia during 1994 to 2006.

Overall
, Brazil emit highest among all the three countries, while it become
least
producer at the
end
of 2006.

According to graph, in 1994, Brazil discharge 6000 metric tonnes of CFC in the atmosphere, which is highest among all. After that, it fell down to 3700 approximately. Between 2000 and 2006, the number is
reduce
significantly
from about 2200 to less than 100.

The Turkey and Switzerland
also
had CFC emission level at 3000 and 2000, which
show
no
change
till 2000. After that it
end
up
nearly
1500 and 1000. There was a dramatic decline in emission of CFC in Indonesia from 4300 to 1000 metric tonnes during 1994 and 2000.
However
, it
increase
gradually
around 1200 metric tonnes in 2006
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