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The line graph illustrates the percentage of people watching TV and listening to the radio at various time of the day in the UK in October-December 1992.

The line graph illustrates the percentage of people watching TV and listening to the radio at various time of the day in the UK in October-December 1992. 6Ndwl

The line graph illustrates the percentage of people watching TV and listening to the radio at various time of the day in the UK in October-December 1992. Overall, both sources of entertainment experienced fluctuation over the given period. The radio reached a peak of audience in the morning hours, in comparicon with TV audience that increased in the evening. During the night time, both TV and radio showed the drop in population. TV audience was at its lowest point at approximately 2: 30 accounting for only about 2. 5% of UK population. It fluctuated from 2: 30 to 11: 00. Since that time the audience rose quickly reaching a peak at about 21: 00 and falling quickly after that. With regards to the radio audience, it remained stable from 1: 00 to 6: 00 at about 2. 5%. Then, it began to climb steeply reaching its highest level of approximately 25% of population at 9: 00 and gradually declining since then to almost 3% at 23: 00.

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 the drop in population.

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 was at its lowest point at approximately 2: 30 accounting for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
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 about 2. 5% of UK population. It fluctuated from 2: 30 to 11: 00. Since that time the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgatheringcrowdgallerycongregationpublicmarket
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 rose quickly
 reaching a peak at about 21: 00 and falling quickly
 after that.

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, it remained stable from 1: 00 to 6: 00 at about 2. 5%. Then, it began to climb steeply
 reaching its highest level of approximately 25% of population at 9: 00 and gradually
 declining since then to almost 3% at 23: 00. 