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The line graph above shows the number of people who moved from 4 countries in Europe to the United States of Amerika

The line graph above shows the number of people who moved from 4 countries in Europe to the United States of Amerika GNwqe
The graph illustrates the number of people who moved from home countries (Norway, Spain, Greece, Ireland) to the United States of America between 1867- 1907. Overall, Ireland have the highest number on the graph whereas, Greece have the lowest number. Although Norway plumed to in 1877 still second highest number in the graph. In addition, in the period of given, Spain's number rose regularly. Even though Greece started the bottomed out number in the graph which is less than 1, increased regularly. On the contrary, Ireland have started the highest point of graph in 1867. After that year, in the period of given Ireland declined regularly. Norway have fluctuated graph. After reached a high of point in 1877, numbers had declined regularly. Spanish people who moved to United States of America.
The
graph
illustrates the
number
of
people
who
moved
from home countries (Norway, Spain, Greece, Ireland) to the United States of America between
1867- 1907
.

Overall
, Ireland have the highest
number
on the
graph
whereas, Greece
have
the lowest
number
.
Although
Norway plumed to in 1877
still
second highest
number
in the
graph
.
In addition
, in the period of
given
, Spain's
number
rose
regularly
.

Even though
Greece
started
the bottomed out
number
in the
graph
which is less than 1, increased
regularly
.
On the contrary
, Ireland have
started
the highest point of
graph
in 1867. After that year, in the period of
given
Ireland declined
regularly
.

Norway have fluctuated
graph
. After reached a high of point in 1877,
numbers
had declined
regularly
. Spanish
people
who
moved
to United States
of America.
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IELTS academic The line graph above shows the number of people who moved from 4 countries in Europe to the United States of Amerika

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