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The graph below show category of citrus fruits and top three counties which it exported (thousand tonnes ) in 2012

The graph below show category of citrus fruits and top three counties which it exported (thousand tonnes ) in 2012 GNYLx

The given column charts depict the data about four types of citrus fruits that were exported by different countries in the year 2012. Overall, from the bar graph, it is clear that the USA contributed for all kind of fruits, while Mexico accounted for the highest proportion for lemon and other fruits. To begin with oranges, south africa was made up the highest that was around 100 thousand tonnes, being higer than Egypt contribution (500 thousand tonnes). The United State was not far away from this figure with approximately 490 thousand toones. In contrast, Turkey was dominant county for the export of grapes. Interestingly, Mexico was higher as compared to the USA that was 300 and 200 thousand tonnes respectively. With regard to lemons, Mexico made up the highest numbers (nearby 500 thousand tonnes ). The figure showed same pattern for other fruits in Mexico. However, 200 thousand tonnes lemons were exported by the United state, while Argentina at the lowest point. Whereas, Egypt and the USA accounted for the least for other fruits export.

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