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The chart below shows some reported issue in uk in 2008

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The given bar graph demonstrates the information about the major issues faced by people who lived in uk in year2008. The data has been caliberated in percentage. From the overall analysis, it is noticeable that the highest percentage of people faced health services problem over the given time period. As it is crystal clear from the chart that in london and Birmingham, more than50% natives faced issues regarding education and training and Health. Wheras, few percentage of people faced pollution problem in New Castle, Belfast, bermingham and glass gow that was near about 10%. in Manchester majority of people faced hurdles about education and training with 40%. Moving further, 60% people reported health services issue in Belfast. While, 45% natives faced education and training in Manchester. , the lowest percentage of people faced air pollution hurdle in London with 15% in 2008.
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bar graph demonstrates the information about the major issues
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health services problem over the
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time period.

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from the chart that in
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and Birmingham, more than50% natives
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issues regarding education and training and Health.
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pollution problem in New Castle, Belfast,
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that was near about 10%.
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Manchester majority of
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hurdles about education and training with 40%.

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reported health services issue in Belfast. While, 45% natives
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education and training in Manchester.
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the lowest percentage of
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air pollution hurdle in London with 15% in 2008.
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