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Life cycle of silk worm and production of silk

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The diagram illustrate about the life cycle of the silk worm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. As usuall at the begining they lay еgg and wait to hatch After a sucesfull hatch its time silkworm upto to days. feed then because they are hungry. The favourate food of those larvas is the mulberry leaf. After 4-6 weeks of feeding this leaf it as the larva turned into a sills thred, so the next moment is to change an Cocoon for atleast 16 days. For a sucess of a month it become the proces), a butterfly and reper Upcomming the Production of Sik. The production of sik start with select the right Cocoon and put it into boiling water. After that the silks unwind into 300-900m treat Finally it twist and weave to dry it and Finalise the product for sale.
The diagram illustrate about the life cycle of the silk worm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.

As
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usuall
at the
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begining
they lay
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еgg
and wait to hatch After a
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sucesfull
hatch its time silkworm
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upto
to days.
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feed
then
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because
they are hungry. The
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favourate
food of those
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larvas
is the mulberry leaf.

After 4-6 weeks of feeding this leaf it as the larva turned into
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a sills
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thred
,
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so
the
next
moment is to
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change
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an
Cocoon for
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atleast
16 days. For a
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sucess
of a month it
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become
the
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proces
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)
, a butterfly and
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reper


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Upcomming
the Production of
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Sik
. The production of
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sik
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start
with select the right Cocoon and put it into boiling water. After that the silks unwind into 300
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-900m
treat
Finally
it
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twist
and weave to dry it and
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Finalise
the product for sale.
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IELTS academic Life cycle of silk worm and production of silk

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  American English
4 paragraphs
144 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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