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THE PIE CHAT BELOW COMPARES THE HOUSE EXPENDITURE IN YEAR OF 1950 AND 2010

THE PIE CHAT BELOW COMPARES THE HOUSE EXPENDITURE IN YEAR OF 1950 AND 2010 25Ogx
THE DATA GIVEN IN THIS PIE CHART DEPICTS THE CHANGE IN PERCENTAGES OF HOUSEHOLD EXPENDITURES IN A COUNTRY DURING THE YEAR OF 1950 AND 2010. IT EASILY OBSERVABLE THAT THERE WERE SIGNIFICANT DIFFERENCES OVERALL, IN THE FIRST PERIOD HOUSING WAS THE MOST SIGNIFICANT EXPENDITURE IN-COUNTRY WHILE PEOPLE SPENT THE LEAST AMOUNT OF MONEY ON HEALTHCARE. IN COMPARISON, AT END PERIOD RATIO OF FOOD LAVISHING HAD DISTINCTIVE AMOUNT OF CHANGE AND TRANSPORTATION WAS THE LEAST OUTLAY. PERCENTAGES OF TRANSPORTATION INCREASED AT THE LAST PERIOD TO 6. 5%, AND FOOD SECTOR AMOUNTED FOR 34 %, WHILE OTHERS EXPENSIVE ALSO ROSE TO 19%. HOUSING EXPERIENCED A SEVERE DOWNFALL OF PERCENTAGES IN 2010 AND EDUCATION SLIGHTLY SHIFT DOWN TO 6. 36%.
THE DATA
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GIVEN
IN THIS PIE CHART DEPICTS THE
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CHANGE
IN PERCENTAGES OF HOUSEHOLD EXPENDITURES IN A COUNTRY DURING THE YEAR OF 1950 AND 2010. IT
EASILY
OBSERVABLE THAT THERE WERE SIGNIFICANT
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DIFFERENCES


OVERALL
, IN THE
FIRST
PERIOD HOUSING WAS THE MOST SIGNIFICANT EXPENDITURE IN-COUNTRY WHILE
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PEOPLE
SPENT THE LEAST AMOUNT OF MONEY ON HEALTHCARE.
IN COMPARISON
, AT
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END
PERIOD RATIO OF FOOD LAVISHING HAD DISTINCTIVE AMOUNT OF
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CHANGE
AND TRANSPORTATION WAS THE LEAST OUTLAY.

PERCENTAGES OF TRANSPORTATION INCREASED AT THE LAST PERIOD TO 6. 5%, AND FOOD SECTOR AMOUNTED FOR 34 %, WHILE OTHERS EXPENSIVE
ALSO
ROSE TO 19%.

HOUSING EXPERIENCED A SEVERE DOWNFALL OF PERCENTAGES IN 2010 AND EDUCATION
SLIGHTLY
SHIFT DOWN TO 6. 36%.

IELTS academic THE PIE CHAT BELOW COMPARES THE HOUSE EXPENDITURE IN YEAR OF 1950 AND 2010

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