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The chart shows the survey of the number of coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in Five Australian States

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The grouped bar chart represents the findings of a research, on individual's habit on purchasing and consumption of coffee and tea over four weeks in five Australian States. The city residents is represented in percentages. Overall, the majority of persons from Hobart, Melbourne, Sydney and Brisbane went to a Café for coffee or tea in the last four weeks, while Adelaide bought mostly instant coffee over the weeks. Only few persons bought fresh coffee in all the cities. Turning first to Hobart, Melbourne and Sydney which has more than 60 percentage people that visited a Café for coffee or tea over the last four weeks meanwhile individuals that bought instant coffee are lower than 55 percent while people that purchase fresh coffee are lower than 45percent. In contrast to this, only Adelaide has more persons than purchased instant coffee with a value of 50percent, followed by 48percent of people that went to a Café and 34percent of folks purchased fresh coffee. Meanwhile, least percentages of people purchased fresh coffee in all the States evidence by both Brisbane and Adelaide having less than 35percentthat compensated fresh coffee.
The grouped bar chart represents the findings of a research, on individual's habit on purchasing and consumption of
coffee
and tea over four
weeks
in five Australian States. The city residents
is represented
in percentages.

Overall
, the majority of persons from Hobart, Melbourne, Sydney and Brisbane went to a Café for
coffee
or tea in the last four
weeks
, while Adelaide
bought
mostly
instant
coffee
over the
weeks
.
Only
few persons
bought
fresh
coffee
in all the cities.

Turning
first
to Hobart, Melbourne and Sydney which has more than 60 percentage
people
that visited a Café for
coffee
or tea over the last four
weeks
meanwhile individuals that
bought
instant
coffee
are lower than 55
percent
while
people
that
purchase
fresh
coffee
are lower than 45percent.

In contrast
to this,
only
Adelaide has more persons than
purchased
instant
coffee
with a value of
50percent
, followed by
48percent
of
people
that went to a Café and
34percent
of folks
purchased
fresh
coffee
. Meanwhile,
least
percentages of
people
purchased
fresh
coffee
in all the States evidence by both Brisbane and Adelaide having less than 35percentthat compensated
fresh
coffee
.
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