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The graph below provides a breakdown of the UK weekly market share of visits to three social networking websites between March 2007 and March 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The graph below provides a breakdown of the UK weekly market share of visits to three social networking websites between March 2007 and March 2008. A5aw
Uk Weekly Market Share of Visits The graph shows the market share of a variety of every social networking site in the Uk weekly from 10th March 2007 through 8th March 2008. The graph in March 2007 the share of the market of Bebo started with the high number 1. 12%, and in the middle of June to March, it increased slowly but finally, it is stable with 1. 44% Myspace is same as Bebo high than Facebook in beginning from 1. 13% but it went soared down from September to March 2008 it is around 0, 89% Finally, Facebook is more popular than Bebo and Myspace, the graph points out the Facebook started frow low level zero point three percent on 10th March 2007 however this site hit and plummeted every week and rose to continue step by step and get the higher number which is 1. 96%. to conclude, we can see that star in beginning with the most visiting is not an excuse however, Facebook is the most popular and the most visiting every week.
Uk
Weekly Market Share of Visits

The graph
shows
the market share of a variety of every social networking site in the
Uk
weekly from 10th March 2007 through 8th March 2008.

The graph in March 2007 the share of the market of
Bebo
started
with the high number 1. 12%, and in the middle of June to March, it increased
slowly
but
finally
, it is stable with 1. 44%

Myspace
is same as
Bebo
high
than Facebook in beginning from 1. 13%
but
it went soared down from September to March 2008 it is around 0, 89%

Finally
, Facebook is more popular than
Bebo
and
Myspace
, the graph points out the Facebook
started
frow
low level zero point three percent on 10th March 2007
however


this
site hit and plummeted every week and rose to continue step by step and
get
the higher number which is 1. 96%.

to
conclude, we can
see
that star in beginning with the most visiting is not an excuse
however
, Facebook is the most popular and the most visiting every week.
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IELTS academic The graph below provides a breakdown of the UK weekly market share of visits to three social networking websites between March 2007 and March 2008.

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