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The graph below plots rail industry revenues and subsidies from 1989-90 to 2009-10. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below plots rail industry revenues and subsidies from 1989-90 to 2009-10. payA3
The graph illustrates the percentage of government support from the total revenue in the rail industry from year 1989-90 to 2009-10. Whereas, the cost of revenue is according to year 2009-10. Overall, the total cost of revenue as well as the government support was high in year 2006-07. Whereas, it was low in year 1995-96. It also seen that government never supported more than 45% in any of these year. At the begenning of year 1889-90, the cost of revenue was slighty more than 6 billion pound, and government support almost 25% which costs 1. 75 billion pound. Moreoevr, till 1992-93, wealth is increased around 8 billion ponds, and the contribution of government was 40% of the amount. Furthermore, cost dropped to 5 billion in 1995-96, but government contributed only 0. 5 billion pounds. After this year there was increment in rate of revenue in 1998-99 it almost 7 billion ponds with 30% of subsidy and again dropped slightly till 2000-2001. From 2001 it continuesly growing up and it was at peak in year 2006-2007 with amount 14 billion ponds with 6. 5 billion subsidy. Furtherly, it decreased to 37 billion pond in year 2009-2010.
The graph illustrates the percentage of
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support from the total
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revenue
in the rail industry from
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1989-90 to 2009-10.
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cost
of
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is according to
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2009-10.

Overall
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of
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as well
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support was high in
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2006-07.
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1995-96. It
also
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that
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never supported more than 45% in any of
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begenning
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1889-90, the
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of
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was
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slighty
more than 6
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billion
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, and
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support almost 25% which
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1. 75
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, till 1992-93, wealth
is increased
around 8
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billion
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ponds
, and the contribution of
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was 40% of the amount.
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,
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dropped to 5
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in 1995-96,
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contributed
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0. 5
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After this
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there was increment in rate of
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in 1998-99 it almost 7
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billion
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ponds
with 30% of subsidy and again dropped
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till 2000-2001. From 2001 it
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growing up and it was at peak in
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2006-2007 with amount 14
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ponds
with 6. 5
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billion
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Furtherly
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pond
in
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2009-2010.

IELTS academic The graph below plots rail industry revenues and subsidies from 1989-90 to 2009-10.

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