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The plans below show a library in 2004 and 2014

The plans below show a library in 2004 and 2014 mXylr

The given plans depict a library from 2004 and 2014. As can be seen, it is clearly evident that there were a number of notable shifts taking place in the library, such as the children's area, computers, fiction, and enquiry/issue desk. To begin with, one of the major changes is the demolition of fiction, which resulted in an extended build of computers. In addition, half of it has vanished. The children's area has been enlarged, and computers have been added. The enquiry/issue desk and study area, which are located in the left lower corner, have been converted into a quiet area. Similarly, in the middle right corner, a video/CDs for students has been given way to a self-service issue machine (SSIM). Furthermore, the space in the middle of the library has been established for Fiction Thrillers and Fiction Romance. In contrast, the displays have stayed unchanged at the same location. To summarize, the two maps illustrate the development of a library from 2004 until 2014. Generally, the library has been improved and developed to serve everyone's learning.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 plans depict a library Nonstandard phrase. Did you mean: "from 2004 to 2014"?from 2004 to 2014
from 2004 and 2014
. As can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
, it is clearly
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area
, computers, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdramanovelmythimaginationfableyarn
fiction
, and Possible spelling mistake. 'enquiry' is British English.inquiry
enquiry
/issue desk.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, one of the major This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 is the demolition of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdramanovelmythimaginationfableyarn
fiction
, which resulted in an extended build of computers. In addition
, half of it has vanished. The children's You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 has been enlarged
, and computers have been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
. The Possible spelling mistake. 'enquiry' is British English.inquiry
enquiry
/issue desk and study You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
, which are located
 in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 lower corner, have been converted
 into a quiet You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
. Similarly
, in the middle right corner, a video/CDs for students has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 way to a self-service issue machine (SSIM). Furthermore
, the space in the middle of the library has been established
 for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdramanovelmythimaginationfableyarn
Fiction
 Thrillers and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdramanovelmythimaginationfableyarn
Fiction
 Romance. In contrast
, the displays have stayed unchanged at the same location.

To summarize
, the two maps illustrate the development of a library from 2004 until 2014. Generally
, the library has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorated
improved
 and developed to serve everyone's learning. 