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The bar chart shows the daily meat consumption by region in 1961 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the daily meat consumption by region in 1961 and 2013. O6JOj
The bar chart shows the amount of meat consumed by some different regions every day in 1961, in comparison with the data in 2013. Overall, the daily meat consumption of all regions increased in 2013 compared to 1961. It is witnessed that North America, Europe, South America and Asia have significant differences in those figures between two periods, more than 100 grams of meat per capita apart. Furthermore, that difference shown in South America is approximately two times higher, with about 110 grams in 1961 and nearly 220 grams in 2013. Asia barely consumed meat in 1961, but the grams of meat eaten by each person rose to above 100 grams. In contrast, the amount of meat consumed by Oceania and Africa experienced a slightly risen in that period, just under 100 grams of meat apart. However, Oceania still be the second among the regions that eat meat the most. And Africa in terms of meat consumption, becomes the lowest rank with just only about 90 grams per capitain 2013, a rank that previously belonged to Asia in 1961.
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some
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different
regions every day in 1961,
in comparison
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Overall
, the daily
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meat
consumption of all regions increased in 2013 compared to 1961.

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is witnessed
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grams
of
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meat
per capita apart.
Furthermore
, that difference shown in South America is approximately two times higher, with about 110
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grams
in 1961 and
nearly
220
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grams
in 2013. Asia
barely
consumed
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meat
in 1961,
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grams
of
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meat
eaten by each person rose to above 100 grams.

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, the amount of
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meat
consumed by Oceania and Africa experienced a
slightly
risen in that period,
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under 100
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grams
of
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apart.
However
, Oceania
still
be the second among the regions that eat
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meat
the most. And Africa in terms of
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consumption, becomes the lowest rank with
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about 90
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2013, a rank that previously belonged to Asia in 1961.

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