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The graph below illustrates the number of tourists visiting Caribbean Island from 2010 until 2017.

The graph below illustrates the number of tourists visiting Caribbean Island from 2010 until 2017. 9r2d0
The graph below illustrates the number of tourists visiting Caribbean Island from 2010 until 2017. The number of visitors staying on cruise ship and staying on island fluctuated during the period. But, the total of both categories mostly increases every year. The visitor staying on cruise ship rose from 0. 25 million to 0. 5 million from 2010 to 2011, then it dropped back to the initial value. For the rest of the years, the amount of people increased until it reaches 2 million at 2017. In the terms of visitor staying on island, the number of visitors grow significantly from 0. 75 million in 2011 to 1. 5 million in 2013. Since then, it remains the same with 1. 5 million visitors. The total of both visitor staying on cruise and island dramatically increases from 2010 until 2015 then it stayed at the same level for 1 year. Furthermore, the number continue to rise until reaching its peak in 2017.
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of tourists visiting Caribbean
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Island
from 2010 until 2017.

The
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of
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visitors
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on cruise ship and
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staying
on
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island
fluctuated during the period.
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But
, the total of both categories
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increases every year.

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on cruise ship rose from 0. 25
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million
to 0. 5
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million
from 2010 to 2011, then it dropped back to the initial value. For the rest of the years, the amount of
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people
increased until it reaches 2
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million
at 2017. In the terms of
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visitor
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staying
on
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island
, the
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of
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grow
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from 0. 75
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in 2011 to 1. 5
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million
in 2013. Since then, it remains the same with 1. 5
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million
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visitors
. The total of both
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visitor
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on cruise and
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island
dramatically
increases from 2010 until 2015 then it stayed at the same level for 1 year.
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, the
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continue to rise until reaching its peak in 2017.
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