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The diagram shows a solar water-heating system from a contemporary home.

The diagram shows a solar water-heating system from a contemporary home. 75gYX

The diagram demonstrates data about how contemporary home is heated by solar water-heating system in order to make hot water for domestic use. It is obvious that this process starts from heating the water and ends up with sending hot domestic water. First of all, water passes through check valve and system for drainage by pipes. Then it goes through the pipes while it is pumped. After pumping working fluid mixture which consists of water and anti-freeze goes to coiled pipes where cold water goes in and hot water for domestic use goes out. Following that, fluid inside the pipe goes solar panel whlist numerous amount of it is poured into water tank using overflow vent.

The diagram demonstrates data about how contemporary home is heated
 by solar water-heating system in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 hot You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 for domestic This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
.

It is obvious that this process This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiates
starts
 from heating the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 and ends up with sending hot domestic water.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 passes through This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 valve and system for drainage by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withventhoseductsewervesselline
pipes
. Then it goes through the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withventhoseductsewervesselline
pipes
 while it is pumped
. After pumping working fluid mixture which consists of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 and anti-freeze goes to coiled You use this word too often, consider replacing it withventhoseductsewervesselline
pipes
 where This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 goes in and hot You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 for domestic This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 goes out.

Following that, fluid inside the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withventhoseductsewervesselline
pipe
 goes solar panel Possible spelling mistake found.whilstwhist
whlist
 numerous amount of it is poured
 into You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 tank using overflow vent. 