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To begin with the oldest underground railway service provider was london started in 1863 covered 394kms of route and convey 775 million passengers to their destination. The newest subway was Los Angeles established in 2001 with second least route covered 28kms and 50million passengers travelled in addition with paris become second subterran service provider begin in 1990 area surrounded by this was 199kms with second highest number of passengers travelling is 1911 million. Another side Washington DC railway service begin 76years later from Paris and coverage of track was 126 kms with 144 million passengers travelling. Furthermore Tokyo railway service registered highest number of travelers 1927 million and it initiated in 1927 with 155 kms zone surrounded. on the other hand Kyoto least number in sector covered and travelers 45 million. overall, Tokyo is the highest number of travellers. london is the oldest service provider and also maximum surface surround by London.
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to their destination. The newest subway was Los Angeles established in 2001 with second least route covered 28kms and
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50million
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in 1990 area surrounded by this was 199kms with second highest
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. Another side Washington DC railway
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Tokyo railway
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registered highest
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and it initiated in 1927 with 155
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152 words
5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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