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The graph below illustrates five personal issues commonly faced by a number of students studying in CFS IIUM in Semester 1.

The graph below illustrates five personal issues commonly faced by a number of students studying in CFS IIUM in Semester 1. kmE2
The static bar graph illustrates the common problems faced by CFS IIUM students in Semester 1. In general, it can be seen that the number of male and female students who faced the common problems in CFS IIUM in semester 1 was almost equal. Referring to the graph, the highest common problem faced by students in CFS IIUM in semester 1 was homesickness which involved 130 female students while the lowest was poor sleep habits faced by 25 female students. Furthermore, at 75 male students, the involvement of students in facing time management problems was higher than the male students that have financial management problems. The difference between male and female students who hadhave depression was moderate at 35 students. On the contrary, there was no difference between the number of male and female students who faced time management problems which both consist of 75 students. Moreover, the number of female students who have depression was much lower than the number of female students that have financial management problems which were 58 students and 85 students respectively. In brief, it can be concluded that male and female students were equally involved in facing the common problems in CFS IIUM in semester 1.
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IELTS academic The graph below illustrates five personal issues commonly faced by a number of students studying in CFS IIUM in Semester 1.

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