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the given two map show the grange park in 1920 and present

the given two map show the grange park in 1920 and present 2E9b

The given two maps illustrate the Grange park in 1920 and its present look. Overall, it can be seen that at the beginning of the period this park was less facilitated. However at present it has more facilities than earliar. Such as underground carpark, children's play area as well as huge amphitheatre for concerts. In 1920, there was a fountain in the middle of the park and the stage which is for musicians was located between two rose gardens and two seating areas. Another seating areas in north west and south west to the stage and near to the glasshouse. Pond which is used to water the plants was in north east corner of the park. At the early, park had two separate entrances by the Arnold street and by the Eldon street. At present, it's look very attractive. It is same as size. At the first glance can see fountain was demolished and huge rose garden is replaced. Around the garden there are four seating areas. To the west side of the park Amphitheatre is built instead of stage. The pond was removed and children's play area is established. Water feature is constructed behalf of glasshouse and seating area. There is a new cafe beside the play area.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 two maps illustrate the Grange You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 in 1920 and its present look.

Overall
, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that at the beginning of the period this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 was less facilitated. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
However
 at present it has more facilities than Possible spelling mistake found.earlierear liar
earliar
. Such as underground Possible spelling mistake found.car parkcarp ark
carpark
, children's play You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
as well
 as huge Possible spelling mistake. 'amphitheatre' is British English.amphitheater
amphitheatre
 for concerts.

In 1920, there was a fountain in the middle of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 and the stage which is for musicians was located
 between two rose gardens and two You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaccommodation
seating
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
. Another You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaccommodation
seating
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
 in This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.north-westnorthwest
north west
 and This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.south-westsouthwest
south west
 to the stage and near to the glasshouse. Pond which is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to water the plants was in This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.north-eastnortheast
north east
 corner of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
. At the early, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 had two separate entrances by the Arnold street and by the Eldon street.

At present, it's look This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 attractive. It is same as size. At the first
 glance can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 fountain was demolished
 and huge rose garden is replaced
. Around the garden there are four You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaccommodation
seating
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
. To the west side of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
Possible spelling mistake. 'Amphitheatre' is British English.Amphitheater
Amphitheatre
is built
instead
 of stage. The pond was removed
 and children's play You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
is established
. Water feature is constructed
 behalf of glasshouse and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaccommodation
seating
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
. There is a new 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
 beside the play You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
. 