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The graph below gives information from a report about the purpose and frequency of internet use by medical students in 2009 in one country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information from a report about the purpose and frequency of internet use by medical students in 2009 in one country. leb71
The bar chart illustrates the purpose and regularity of internet use by medical students in 2009 located in one area. Overall, there is a big distance between the percentage of students who use the internet for some main purpose. Students who use the email weekly have the highest percentage, on the other hand, the internet using at least daily has the lowest percentage. As can be seen from the graph, the medical students using the internet daily have the smallest percentage, only chatting is growing the most between four kinds of purpose. The percentage in monthly seems almost the same as the daily, it has the email growing the most but the chat is the lowest, about 8 percent. Occasionally, weekly and never are having the most development number, they do not have any big difference between each other. The percentage in use for information for the patient in the never column is almost as high as the email in the weekly column. Meanwhile, five parts in the occasional column do not have too much difference, only information for the patient has the lowest percentage, around 10.
The bar chart illustrates the purpose and regularity of internet
use
by medical
students
in 2009 located in one area.

Overall
, there is a
big
distance between the
percentage
of
students
who
use
the internet for
some
main purpose.
Students
who
use
the email weekly have the highest
percentage
,
on the other hand
, the internet using at least daily has the lowest percentage.

As can be
seen
from the graph, the medical
students
using the internet daily have the smallest
percentage
,
only
chatting is growing the most between four kinds of purpose. The
percentage
in monthly seems almost the same as the daily, it has the email growing the most
but
the chat is the lowest, about 8 percent.

Occasionally
, weekly and
never are
having the most development number, they do not have any
big
difference between each other. The
percentage
in
use
for information for the patient in the never column is almost as high as the email in the weekly column. Meanwhile, five parts in the occasional column do not have too much difference,
only
information for the patient has the lowest
percentage
, around 10.
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