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The changes of paris between 1995 and today

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Two maps illustrate the main changes which have taken place in the town of Paris between the year: from 1995 until nowadays. Overall, it can be seen that Paris has become much more modern and busy, with new shopping and transport facilities. One interesting change is that a new football stadium has been established on the left-hand side of the station. The north-east of the city used to be a green area, with lots of trees, however, the trees have been chopped down and a new airport has been erected. Another striking change is that the ancient houses have been knocked down to make way for a new skyscraper. There did not use to be a factory near the city center, however, the last few years have seen the building of shopping centre in the direction of west. A notable change has been the conversion of the tree area into an apartment block. A final interesting development is that the replacement of church into a pub.
Two maps illustrate the main
changes
which have taken place in the town of Paris between the year: from 1995 until nowadays.
Overall
, it can be
seen
that Paris has become much more modern and busy, with
new
shopping and transport facilities. One interesting
change
is that a
new
football stadium has
been established
on the
left
-hand side of the station. The north-east of the city
used
to be a green area, with lots of trees,
however
, the trees have
been chopped
down and a
new
airport has
been erected
. Another striking
change
is that the ancient
houses
have
been knocked
down to
make
way for a
new
skyscraper. There did not
use to
be a factory near the city center,
however
, the last few years have
seen
the building of shopping
centre
in the direction of west. A notable
change
has been the conversion of the tree area into an apartment block. A final interesting development is that the replacement of church into a pub.
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