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The diagrams show how a District park looked ten years ago and how it looks now.

The diagrams show how a District park looked ten years ago and how it looks now. mWR9n

The provided set of charts depict alterations that took place in a District park from 2004 to 2014. Overall, it is apparent from the chart that the area has witnessed significant changes over the end of the given period. A district park was completely transformed with addition of numerous renovations resulting in luxurious infrastructures and improved facilities by the final year. Focusing in the 2004, there was a rectangular-shaped football ground behind the Green Area and above Car park containing 20 cars. Moreover, pond situated next to the Football ground while children's play area located nearby tennis courts. At last, we can see that the entrance was spotted to the west of tennis courts. v After a decade cycling path had been constructed all around a district park, surrounding the entire facilities. Children soft play area had added besides children soft play area in the top of right-hand corner. Green area was made into smaller including a cafe. Similarly, toielts added in the middle of Children soft play area and Green area. Car park was extended from 20 cars to 50 cars. The most noticeable point are that the tennis court, children's play area and entrance entrance was only the feature that remain untouched.

The provided set of charts depict alterations that took place in a District You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 from 2004 to 2014.

Overall
, it is apparent from the chart that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 has witnessed significant This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 over the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 period. A district You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 was completely transformed with addition of numerous renovations resulting in luxurious infrastructures and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorated
improved
 facilities by the final year.

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Area
 and above You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
Car
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park
 containing 20 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
cars
. Moreover
, pond situated next
 to the Football ground while children's You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhitshowdramaperformancecomedymusical
play
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area
 located nearby tennis courts. At last, we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 that the entrance was spotted
 to the west of tennis courts. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterV
v


After a decade cycling path had been constructed
 all around a district You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
, surrounding the entire facilities. Children soft You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhitshowdramaperformancecomedymusical
play
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area
 had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
besides
 children soft You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhitshowdramaperformancecomedymusical
play
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area
 in the top of right-hand corner. Green You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
was made
 into smaller including a 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
. Similarly
, Possible spelling mistake found.toilets
toielts
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 in the middle of Children soft You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhitshowdramaperformancecomedymusical
play
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area
 and Green You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
Car
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park
was extended
 from 20 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
cars
 to 50 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
cars
. The most noticeable point are that the tennis court, children's You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhitshowdramaperformancecomedymusical
play
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 and Possible typo: you repeated a wordentrance
entrance entrance
 was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 the feature that remain untouched. 