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The table depicts the outcome of surveys conducted regarding McGill University on 5 different categories in 2005, 2010 and 2015. Overall, it is clear from data that range of modules offered was the field remained lowest in all 3 years. University student services got highest percentage in 2015, whereas, library resources rated consistently well in remaining 2 years. Furthermore, range of modules offered by McGill University were initially 39% in 2005 which got poorer in each year with a steady drop to 31% in 2010 and 25% in 2015 though, remained the lowest rating. In contrary, student services have a drastic increase from 54% in 2005 to 95% in 2015. As per sports and social facilities of University is concerned according to students it maintained it services to 65% in all years. Moreover, Ratings for teaching quality and library resources showed good results despite of slight fluctuation in 2005. Student voted teaching quality 74% which had a 2% decrease in 2010 and then 6% increase to 78% in 2015. Whereas, library resources was stable in between 86% to 88% in mentioned 3 years.

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