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The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.

The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. nYmE
The line graph illustrates the information regarding the number of the energy which was utilized in the USA from 1980 and how much it will consume till 2030. In the year of 1980 it is evident from the data that the highest proportion of Electricity was used by an oil which was 35 quadrillion; in case of coal and natural gas these two consume nearly 20 and 50 quadrillion of energy in this year. Apart from date after 1980 number of energy which was utilized by petrol and oil was soared dramatically, also this number may elevate in the future and in the end of timeline it reached to 50 quadrillion. On the other hand, there was a fluctuation in energy consumption by coal and natural gas from 1980 to 2020. However, for coal number shall escalate by roughly 7 quadrillion; whereas, for natural gas proportion will remain constant in the upcoming decade. Besides this, in the initial period the least number of energy used by nuclear, solar and hydropower around 5 quadrillion. on the contrary, this was increased gradually after 1980 and this up-ward trend might happen in the future. Overall, it can be inferred that energy consumption of energy in the USA soar dramatically and petrol and oil used more electricity as compared with others.
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by an oil which was 35 quadrillion; in case of coal and natural gas these two consume
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in this year. Apart from date after 1980
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consumption by coal and natural gas from 1980 to 2020.
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shall escalate by roughly 7 quadrillion; whereas, for natural gas proportion will remain constant in the upcoming decade.

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by nuclear, solar and hydropower around 5 quadrillion.
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consumption of
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in the USA soar
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IELTS academic The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.

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