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The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1

The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. OL8d
The two diagrams provide information about the functioning of a wave-energy machine as well as informs us about the location options for the installation of the device according to the length of the waves and the cost of it with the volume of output, it will generate. Air travels upwards into the lower chambers of the machine with the help of water waves which causes the lower turbine to spin. At the same time the upward set of turbine is rotated by the airflow in the atmosphere. This generates electricity using the speed of the turbines caused by different airflow. When the equipment is installed in deeper sea-level, it yields higher output and requires high installation cost, while those build nearer to the ground generates low output and needs lower installation cost. Overall, it can be seen that the volume of electricity generated depends on the wave length of water as well as the airflow. The location of installation, however, creates a difference in administrative costs and output level.
The two diagrams provide information about the functioning of a wave-energy machine
as well
as informs us about the location options for the installation of the device according to the length of the waves and the cost of it with the volume of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
output
, it will generate.

Air travels upwards into the lower chambers of the machine with the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
of water waves which causes the lower turbine to spin. At the same time the upward set of turbine
is rotated
by the airflow in the atmosphere. This generates electricity using the speed of the turbines caused by
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different
airflow.

When the equipment
is installed
in deeper sea-level, it yields higher
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
output
and requires high installation cost, while those build nearer to the ground generates low
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
output
and needs lower installation cost.

Overall
, it can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
that the volume of electricity generated depends on the wave length of water
as well
as the airflow. The location of installation,
however
, creates a difference in administrative costs and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
output
level.

IELTS academic The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.

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4 paragraphs
169 words
7.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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