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The graph below gives information about household car ownership in Britain from 1990 to 2030

The graph below gives information about household car ownership in Britain from 1990 to 2030 mQGd
The line graph compares the proportion of car(s) per a family has in United Kingdom in the 40-year period, starting from 1990. Overall, the data on one car rose, the same was true for that of two or more cars over the period. Also, no car saw a biggest change from 1990 to 2030 As can be seen from the graph, no car was the highest figure out of three data with over 50%, after that was approximately 40% for one car and over 10% for two or more cars in 1990. After 15 years, the proportion of one car hit a peak at 55%. No car, however, saw a noticeable drop by over 15%. Beside, two or more cars hit the lowest point at 9%. In term of 2005 to 2030, there was the huge modification in the figure of car ownership. The year 2030 see a significant decline to 41% for the figure of one car and below 20% for that of no car. On the other hand, the proportion of two or more cars climbs rapidly by over 30%. The highest figure is one car, two or more car held the second position and no car is the least. Comparing with 1990, the data on one car rise around 5% and two or more cars rise over 30% while the proportion of no car reduce steeply from over 50% to 15%.
The line graph compares the
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in the 40-year period, starting from 1990.

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rose, the same was true for that of two or more
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cars
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from 1990 to 2030

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from the graph, no
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car
was the highest
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out of three data with
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50%, after that was approximately 40% for one
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and
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10% for two or more
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cars
in 1990. After 15 years, the
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hit a peak at 55%. No
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,
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a noticeable drop by
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15%. Beside, two or more
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hit the lowest point at 9%.

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ownership. The year 2030
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a significant decline to 41% for the
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and below 20% for that of no
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climbs
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, two or more
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is the least. Comparing with 1990, the data on one
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rise around 5% and two or more
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rise
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IELTS academic The graph below gives information about household car ownership in Britain from 1990 to 2030

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