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Percentage of first-year teachers with regular teaching jobs by year of graduation

Percentage of first-year teachers with regular teaching jobs by year of graduation AWKN
The line graph below shows the number in percent of English and French-language teachers with regular teaching at the graduation year from 2001 to 2007. Overall, the trend was deacreasing for English-language teachers, while it is fluctuated and then up a little for French-language teachers. Since 2001 to 2002, there is similarity in the trends, where both of the teacher’s group went down from around 70% to around 51 % for French and around 59% for English. Started from 2002 to 2003 the percentage increased to 69% for French teacher, while it decreased to 41% for English teacher. There was the same increasing trend during the year of 2003 and 2005, where it went up from 40% to 42% for English teacher and 68% to 70% for French teacher. But there are different trend in between 2005 – 2007. They both went down slightly from 70% to 68% for French, and sharply from 42% to 32% for English. But then it keep went down for English teacher to 29% made it the lowest percentage over the years. In contrast, it went up for the Frech teacher, made it increase about 2% from the first year.
The line graph below
shows
the number in percent of English and French-language
teachers
with regular teaching at the graduation
year
from 2001 to 2007.

Overall
, the
trend
was
deacreasing
for English-language
teachers
, while it
is fluctuated
and then up a
little
for French-language teachers.

Since 2001 to 2002, there is similarity in the
trends
, where both of the
teacher’s
group
went
down from around 70% to around 51 % for French and around 59% for English.
Started
from 2002 to 2003 the percentage increased to 69% for French
teacher
, while it decreased to 41% for English teacher.

There was the same increasing
trend
during the
year
of 2003 and 2005, where it
went
up from 40% to 42% for English
teacher
and 68% to 70% for French
teacher
.
But
there are
different
trend
in between 2005 – 2007. They both
went
down
slightly
from 70% to 68% for French, and
sharply
from 42% to 32% for English.
But
then it
keep
went
down for English
teacher
to 29% made it the lowest percentage over the years.
In contrast
, it
went
up for the
Frech
teacher
, made it increase about 2% from the
first
year
.
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