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The maps show some changes on how people can approach the City Hospital from 2007 to 2010 period. Overall, there were some improvements in transport facilities and roads to make people easier to access the City Hospital over the particular years. There was noticeble development on the parking facilities located on the eastern part of Hospital Road. In 2007, it was for staff and public, while in 2010 it was only for the city hospital’s staff. However, a bigger parking lot for the public was rebuilded on the eastern part of City Hospital. Another development was a bigger bus station that was built on the western part of the Hospital Road. It was there since 2010, while in 2007 there were 3 bus stops pinpointed across the right and left side of Hospital Road. In addition, there were similarities on the roads, for example Ring Road, City Road, and Hospital Road were still at the same positions as before. Yet, both intersections located in the ends of Hospital Road became roundabouts in 2010.

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