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how to reach city hospital

how to reach city hospital 2LQb
The maps show some changes on how people can approach the City Hospital from 2007 to 2010 period. Overall, there were some improvements in transport facilities and roads to make people easier to access the City Hospital over the particular years. There was noticeble development on the parking facilities located on the eastern part of Hospital Road. In 2007, it was for staff and public, while in 2010 it was only for the city hospital’s staff. However, a bigger parking lot for the public was rebuilded on the eastern part of City Hospital. Another development was a bigger bus station that was built on the western part of the Hospital Road. It was there since 2010, while in 2007 there were 3 bus stops pinpointed across the right and left side of Hospital Road. In addition, there were similarities on the roads, for example Ring Road, City Road, and Hospital Road were still at the same positions as before. Yet, both intersections located in the ends of Hospital Road became roundabouts in 2010.
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changes
on how
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people
can approach the City
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Hospital
from 2007 to 2010 period.

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, there were
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some
improvements in transport facilities and
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roads
to
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make
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people
easier to access the City
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Hospital
over the particular years.

There was
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noticeble
development on the parking facilities located on the eastern part of
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Hospital
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Road
. In 2007, it was for staff and public, while in 2010 it was
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only
for the city
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hospital’s
staff.
However
, a bigger parking lot for the public was
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rebuilded
on the eastern part of City
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Hospital
. Another development was a bigger bus station that
was built
on the western part of the
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Hospital
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Road
. It was there since 2010, while in 2007 there were 3
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bus
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stops
pinpointed across the right and
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left
side of
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Hospital
Road.

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, there were similarities on the
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Ring
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Road
, City
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Road
, and
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Hospital
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were
still
at the same positions as
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before
.
Yet
, both intersections located in the ends of
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Hospital
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became roundabouts in 2010.

IELTS academic how to reach city hospital

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  American English
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173 words
6.0
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