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The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton

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The chart illustrates information about four different modes of transportation use by Edmonton citizens, while the table provides data on five distinctive causes for driving. Overall, it is clearly visible that people who mostly use private vehicles in order to travel to work, whilst the bust and taxi are less popular in city. As it can be seen from the chart that the car is the most popular means of transportation with 45% in Edmonton. It is closely followed by Light rail transit with 35%, while bus and taxi show the same percentage of traveling with 10%. The table gives data about what reasons people of Edmonton use their vehicles. The main cause to use it to travel to work, business and pick up children to school at 55%, 45% and 40%, respectively. Only 15% of drivers go shop where buying their merchandises and spend to time for recreation activities by their own vehicles.

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 private vehicles in order to travel to work, whilst the bust and taxi are less popular in city.

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 from the chart that the car is the most popular means of transportation with 45% in Edmonton. It is closely
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