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The graph below gives information about the sales of the three most commonly purchased items in a particular bakery for the year 2014.

The graph below gives information about the sales of the three most commonly purchased items in a particular bakery for the year 2014. G0yB

The given line graph provides information about commonly purchased in different three tipy of bakery such as Bread, Buns and Pies in the 2014 Overall, it can be clearly seen that there are different results about starting and ending not only beginning and ending but also there are different changes. To star with, coming to beginning of the period Pies started purchasing 80000 dollars, however, Buns started about 40000 dollars and Bread twice as many as Buns in the beginning. Although Bread started 80000 dollars in the January, but then it was sharply decreased to 45000 dollars and at the end of this year it illustrated the same dollars as beginning. Buns in the mid months it fluctuated. Afterwards, in comparison, there are sensible differences between Pies and Buns. However, at the end of year Both of them provided just the same statistics which were about 35000 dollars. Pies increased during the year but Buns increased to 70000 dollars in the August but then it sharply dropped between month especially August and December.

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