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The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.

The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010. b8dW

The bar graph compares the percentage of women and men who had driving test in one Asian country between 1980 to 2010. It is clear that woman got more driving license than man in all of the four years, especially in 2000. Interestingly, Man had the same percentage of driving exam from 2000 to 2010. In 2000, woman passed nearly 78% driving test, which is the highest figure shown on the chart. By contrast, 1980 was the least year that people chose to do the test, 28% for women and 25% for men. The proportion in 1990 of man and women is had higher than its in 2010. while woman had tendency to decrease slightly in 2010, man was still maintain a stable level, which was under 50% from 2000 to 2010. In 1980, man had just under 30% people who had driving test, which is the lowest figure shown on the chart.

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