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Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that government and indivisuals can tackle these problems

Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that government and indivisuals can tackle these problems Bx65
The assigned bar graph illustrates the information about clubs joined by dwellers of 2 distinct demographics at lesiure centre in small city. Overall, group 25-35 shows more intrest in almost all fields than 55-65 instead of, garderning and photography. In cycling 25-35 shows peakest value of member. Firstly, in garderning almost 22 member are joined by group twenty-five to thirty-five whereas, 55-65 are 55 member. Folks are similer intrested in photography 45 members from each group. 25-35, are more likely to join fitness club than group 55-65, 55 and 50 respectively. Secondly, art and craft approximately 60 membera of first group prefer to join, and almost one-third of group one is joined by 55-65. Music/dance are quite similer ib both group 55, 52 equally. In contrast, in cycling about sixty-five member take addmission from 25-35 howere, only ten members are in cycling by 55-65.
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lesiure
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25-35
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intrest
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and photography. In cycling 25-35
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garderning
almost 22
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twenty-five to thirty-five whereas, 55-65 are 55
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. Folks are
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members
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joined
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group
55, 52
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, in cycling about sixty-five
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IELTS academic Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that government and indivisuals can tackle these problems

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
144 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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