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The graph below gives information about international tourist arrivals in different parts of the world

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The provided image depicts detailed information about the quantity of foreign travellers in five different regions during a 15-year period feom 1990 to 2005. Overall, the number of tourist arrivals in five areas increased during the time frame and North America, Central and Eastern Europe both got the highest-ranking. Meanwhile, Sub-Saharan Africa and South America ranked in the last places. Take a look at the figures in 1990, more than 70 million international tourists travelled to North America, which was doubled the number of those going to Central and Eastern Europe. During the following 10 years, North America reached a peak at over 90 million foreign tourists; by contrast, the figure slightly dropped to around 90 million people in 2005. Meanwhile, Central and Eastern Europe soared from 30 millions to nearly 90 million foreigners over 15 years. Similarly, South-East Asia climbed in visits with 20 million people in 1990 and rose gradually up to under 40 million travellers during the next 10 years. Five years later, it got more 10 million visits than the previous ones. Both Sub-Saharan Africa and South America started with the lowest arrivals, under 10 millions. On the contrary, there was a significant change throughout 15 years, Sub-Saharan Africa was up to over 20 million visitors and ranked at the fourth place, whereas, South America was ranked last with approximately 20 millions.
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1990 to 2005.
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the highest-ranking. Meanwhile, Sub-Saharan Africa and South America ranked in the last places. Take a look at the figures in 1990, more than 70
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million
international tourists travelled to North America, which
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the number of those going to Central and Eastern Europe. During the following 10 years, North America reached a peak at over 90
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million
foreign tourists; by contrast, the figure
slightly
dropped to around 90
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people
in 2005. Meanwhile, Central and Eastern Europe soared from 30
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to
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90
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foreigners over 15 years.
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, South-East Asia climbed in visits with 20
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million
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people
in 1990 and rose
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travellers
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visits than the previous ones. Both Sub-Saharan Africa and South America
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started
with the lowest arrivals, under 10
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.
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, there was a significant
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throughout 15 years, Sub-Saharan Africa was up to over 20
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visitors and ranked at the fourth place, whereas, South America
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