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The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989. 8X5l
The chart represents the percentage change in average house prices in five cities from 1990 to 2002 compared with 1989. Over 5 years, averaged house prices in New York (USA), Madrid (Spain), Tokyo (Japan) and London (UK) have all increased while the averaged house price in Frankfurt (Germany) has decreased. The largest increasing of the averaged house price from the average price in 1990-1995 to the average price in 1996-2000 compared with 1989 was by London (UK) (around -7% to 12%). While the lowest increasing of the averaged house price from the average price in 1990-1995 to the average price in 1996-2000 compared with 1989 was by Tokyo (Japan) (around -7% to -5%). Although the average house price in Frankfurt (Germany) have not increase, the percentage change from 1989 prices in Frankfurt (Germany) shows the higher percentage than the percentage change in Tokyo (Japan). Furthermore, decreasing in average house price percentage is not much. In conclusion, the average house price in London (UK) was increased compared with 1989 as well as New York (USA), Madrid (Spain) and London (UK).
The chart represents the
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in
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in five cities from 1990 to 2002 compared with 1989.

Over 5 years,
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in New York (USA), Madrid (Spain), Tokyo (Japan) and London (UK) have all increased while the
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in Frankfurt (Germany) has decreased. The largest increasing of the
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from the
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in 1990-1995 to the
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in 1996-2000 compared with 1989 was by London (UK) (around -7% to 12%).
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from the
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in 1990-1995 to the
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in 1996-2000 compared with 1989 was by Tokyo (Japan) (around -7% to -5%).

Although the
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in Frankfurt (Germany) have not
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from 1989
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in Frankfurt (Germany)
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the higher
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than the
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in Tokyo (Japan).
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is not much.

In conclusion
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in London (UK)
was increased
compared with 1989
as well
as New York (USA), Madrid (Spain) and London (UK).
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IELTS academic The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.

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