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The map below illustrates the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present

The map below illustrates the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present lp8Q

Overview golf ground and tennis court are builts on the place of farmland and forest park which are used to there in 1995During 1995 there used to be sea in south with fishing port inside it and been destroyed in present time furthermore fish market has been converted into the residence apartment near the road similarly restaurant are constructed on the place of shops in south beside the road moreover car parking has been constructed near hotel which is quiet spaces which is situated in southeasternMoreover place for golf and tennis are constructed on the place of farmland and forest park in east side of map respectively. similarly there used to be few residential apartment are there in 1995 and constructed almost double in present times in western side. society has been constructed in opposite of road side in western

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 of farmland and forest park in east side of map respectively
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