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The chart describes the time spent to have fun by men and women from various type of employments between the year of 2000 and 2019. Overall, unemployed and retired males spent 84 hours of their time for leisure. It made them the most spent hours in spare time for both categories, sex (only for males) and employment. Unemployment and retiredness made people love to spend most of their time for leisure. It happened to both sex, males and females. Only, males (84 hours) spent more 12 hours than females (72 hours). In addition, housewives spent 49 hours of their time for fun. This type of employment was in second position after unemployed and retired females. The employed part-time and full-time females used the least time for relaxation, that were 40 and 38 hours respectively. The second position for males who spent the 36 lesser hours for relaxation were they who have full-time job. Followed by those who employed part-time that spent 23 hours of their time. Finally, the least time used up for leisure were by househusbands that only spent 17 hours of their time.
The chart
describes
the
time
spent
to have fun by
men
and women from various type of employments between the year of 2000 and 2019.

Overall
, unemployed and retired
males
spent
84
hours
of their
time
for leisure. It made them the most
spent
hours
in spare
time
for both categories, sex (
only
for
males)
and employment.

Unemployment and
retiredness
made
people
love
to spend most of their
time
for leisure. It happened to both sex,
males
and
females
.
Only
,
males
(84
hours)
spent
more 12
hours
than
females
(72 hours).

In addition
, housewives
spent
49
hours
of their
time
for fun. This type of employment was in second position after unemployed and retired
females
. The employed part-time and full-time
females
used
the least
time
for relaxation, that were 40 and 38
hours
respectively
.

The second position for
males
who
spent
the 36 lesser
hours
for relaxation were they who have full-time
job
. Followed by those who employed part-time that
spent
23
hours
of their
time
.
Finally
, the least
time
used
up for leisure were by househusbands that
only
spent
17
hours
of their
time
.
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IELTS academic time spent by women and men

Academic
  American English
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185 words
5.5
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