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The graph below gives information about cinema attendance in Australia between 1990 and the present, with projections to 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where r v.2

The graph below gives information about cinema attendance in Australia between 1990 and the present, with projections to 2010.
The line graph demonstrates the percentage of Australian population watching movie in a theathre changed from 1990 to 2010. The movie lovers are divided in four different group of various ages i. e. 14-24 y. o. , 25-34 y. o. , 35-49 y. o. , and 50 y. o. onwards. Overall, all of those populations were reported to have upwards trends with different details. \ In 1990, teens and adults aged under 25 years old became the biggest population coming to a cinema by almost 90%. Meanwhile, the three other groups were far below in about 60% of 25-49 years old, and nearly 40% of more 50 years old. Further, people aged 14-24 y. o. had a minimal increase by almost 100% in 2010, but it was still being the dominant population compared to people aged 25-34 y. o. , 35-49 y. o. , and above 50 y. o. by about 85%, more 70%, and around 60%, respectively. Finally, people aged under 25 y. o. was recorded to love attending cinema very much and was predicted to be remain on the top population of movie viewers until the year 2010.
The line graph demonstrates the percentage of Australian
population
watching movie in a
theathre
changed
from 1990 to 2010. The movie lovers
are divided
in four
different
group
of various ages
i. e.
14-24 y. o.
,
25-34 y. o.
,
35-49 y. o.
,
and 50 y. o. onwards.
Overall
, all of those
populations
were reported
to have upwards trends with
different
details
. \

In 1990, teens and adults
aged
under 25 years
old
became the biggest
population
coming to a cinema by almost 90%. Meanwhile, the three other groups were far below in about 60% of 25-49 years
old
, and
nearly
40% of more 50 years
old
.
Further
,
people
aged
14-24 y. o. had a minimal increase by almost 100% in 2010,
but
it was
still
being the dominant
population
compared to
people
aged
25-34 y. o.
,
35-49 y. o.
,
and above 50 y. o. by about 85%, more 70%, and around 60%,
respectively
.

Finally
,
people
aged
under 25 y. o.
was recorded
to
love
attending cinema
very
much and
was predicted
to be
remain
on the top
population
of movie viewers until the
year
2010.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
10Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes

IELTS academic The graph below gives information about cinema attendance in Australia between 1990 and the present, with projections to 2010.

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