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The graph below gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand between 1901 and 2101.

The graph below gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand between 1901 and 2101. ODxG
The line chart reveals the ratios of birth and death in New Zealand from 1901 to 2101. Overall, the birth rate in New Zealand was higher than death rate in the beginning, however the death rate was expected to exceed the (than) birth rate in nearly 2041 and will be higher than the birth rate in the ending. In details, the birth rate in New Zealand was about 20 percent in 1901, then it increased by almost 10 percent in 1921 before decreased to nearly 27 percent in 1941. Afterwards, New Zealand’s birth rate rocketed and reached a peak in 1960s at approximated 65%, after then it had a fluctuation in the following period until nearly 1991 at just above 60, then it continued dropping and was predicted to dip stably to 2101 at about 43%. For the death rate, it was below 10% in the beginning, and then it rose slightly to nearly 2021 at approximated 33%, then it will rocket to just below 60% in nearly 2051 and have a plateau from 2051 to 2081 before decreasing and being about 56% in the ending.
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Zealand was higher than death
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Zealand was about 20 percent in 1901, then it increased by almost 10 percent in 1921
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27 percent in 1941. Afterwards,
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For the death
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2021 at approximated 33%, then it will rocket to
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2051 and have a plateau from 2051 to 2081
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decreasing and being about 56% in the ending.
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