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The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. knme

The diagram provides information about carbonated drinks making process. Overall, there are several steps before distrubated to the supermarket. The processes took place in the fabric where the drinks are made and packaged. The process began in stage 1 which is the water cleaning stage where the raw water filtered then softened by the water softener before went to the chemicals process. Next, it pumped to the electric heaters before entered the cooling pipe. After that, the raw water changed into carbon dioxide. Furthermore, the carbonated water went through the pipe then arrived in the mixing tank where the water mixed with colors, syrups, and flavours. Next, when the water were mixed, they were filtered before entering the last two steps. After arrived at the fourth stage, they were filtered and filled to the bottles and cans. Finally, the carbonated drinks in bottles and cons are packaged then distributed to the supermarket before they can consumed by the consumer.

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. Overall
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process
 began in stage 1 which is the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 cleaning stage where the raw You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 filtered then softened by the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 softener You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpreviouslyaheadsincebacksooner
before
 went to the chemicals You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
. Next
, it pumped to the electric heaters You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpreviouslyaheadsincebacksooner
before
 entered the cooling pipe. After that, the raw You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 into carbon dioxide.

Furthermore
, the carbonated You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 went through the pipe then arrived in the mixing tank where the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 mixed with colors, syrups, and Possible spelling mistake. 'flavours' is British English.flavors
flavours
. Next
, when the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
were mixed
, they were filtered
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpreviouslyaheadsincebacksooner
before
 entering the last two steps. After arrived at the fourth stage, they were filtered
 and filled to the bottles and cans. Finally
, the carbonated drinks in bottles and cons are packaged
 then distributed to the supermarket You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpreviouslyaheadsincebacksooner
before
 they can The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: "consume"consume
consumed
 by the consumer. 