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The graph below gives information about average housing price throughout the city of Plimsburgh. information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant

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The bar chart illustrates how much did single family homes cost in four different places of Plimsburgh city during ten years. Overall, the average prices of single family houses Sligh dropped in waterfront, uptown and downtown places of Plimsburgh. However, the average price of those homes noticeably rose up in a decade. The average cost of single family homes in waterfront locations was almost the same in both periods. However, the prices of homes in uptown increased by one quarter. The most expensive place for living in Plimsburgh was uptown and the average price of one single family home was $ 275, 000. By 2015, the average price of these houses dramatically dropped to $ 100, 000. Coming to 2015, the lowest price to live in Plimsburgh was downtown where a single family house cost only $ 100, 000
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