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An area transformation from 1995 to present

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The maps illustrate the transformation of an area from 1995 to present. Overall, over the period, the area changed markedly. An area had a fishing port on the sea, also fish market and café established on the coast. There are two other places on the other side of the road, shop and hotel respectively. There is a farmland to the north-east, and a forest park to the south of it. The west part of an area was occupied by houses. During the transformation period, the territory witnessed dramatic changes, like addition of houses. On the other hand, farmland replaced with a golf area and forest park trees cut down, tennis court was constructed instead. The government removed the shop and built a restaurant, added car park near of the hotel. Another changes are apartments which set up in the place of old fish market, and there is no fishing port.
The maps illustrate the transformation of an
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area
from 1995 to present.
Overall
, over the period, the
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area
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changed
markedly
. An
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area
had a fishing port on the sea,
also
fish market and café established on the coast. There are two other places on the other side of the road, shop and hotel
respectively
. There is a farmland to the north-east, and a forest park to the south of it. The west part of an
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area
was occupied
by
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houses
. During the transformation period, the territory witnessed dramatic
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changes
, like addition of
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houses
.
On the other hand
, farmland replaced with a golf
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area
and forest park trees
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cut
down, tennis court
was constructed
instead
. The
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government
removed the shop and built a restaurant,
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added
car park near of the hotel. Another
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changes
are apartments which set up in the place of
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old
fish market, and there is no fishing port.
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