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The diagram shows conversion of thermal energy to electrical energy

The diagram shows conversion of thermal energy to electrical energy gDjpL

The flow chart illustrates the process of producing electrical energy using thermal energy. Overall, it can be seen that, the production of electricity took place by a man-made process in which cold water was processed in 5 various stages and at the end generator and turbine was used to produce and convert thermal energy to electrical energy. In the first stage, cold water was transferred to injection well through a 4. 5 km long piping. In the next stage water goes to geothermal zone where it gets heated by hot rocks. After that it was stored in production well and from there it gets pumped up to steam condenser where steam gets condensed. In the last stage, the condensed steam helps in turning the turbine and as a generator is connected to turbine it results in production of electricity which was then supplied to power grid for commercial use.

The flow chart illustrates the process of producing electrical energy using thermal energy.

Overall
, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that, the production of electricity took place by a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
-made process in which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
 water was processed
 in 5 various You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stages
 and at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 generator and turbine was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to produce and convert thermal energy to electrical energy.

In the first
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stage
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
 water was transferred
 to injection well through a 4. 5 km long piping. In the next
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
 water goes to geothermal zone where it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
 heated by hot rocks. After that it was stored
 in production well and from there it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
 pumped up to steam condenser where steam This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
 condensed.

In the last You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
, the condensed steam This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 in turning the turbine and as a generator is connected
 to turbine it results in production of electricity which was then supplied to power grid for commercial This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
. 