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The line graph provides information about changes in population in the past century and predictions for the future in three various countries, which are Japan, Nigeria and United States. Overall, it can be clearly seen that if amount of people in USA and Nigeria had gradually went up, in Japan it is predicted that might decline. There were 50 millions of people in Nigeria in 1950 and it predicted to reach its peak in 2050, which is approximately 600 millions of individuals and it is the highest number among other countries throughout the period. Americans had increasing trend, however not so far such as Nigeria, which was from around 190 millions of people to 420. In contrast to these two countries, Japan had exactly 100 million people in 1950; it slightly grew to about 140 million, and then it is predicted to marginally decrease till 110 million citizens in 2050.
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in population in the past century and predictions for the future in three various countries, which are Japan, Nigeria and United States.

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that if amount of
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in USA
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that might decline.

There were 50
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of
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people
in Nigeria in 1950 and it predicted to reach its peak in 2050, which is approximately 600
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millions
of individuals and it is the highest number among other countries throughout the period. Americans had increasing trend,
however
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far such as Nigeria, which was from around 190
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millions
of
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to 420.

In contrast
to these two countries, Japan had exactly 100
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million
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people
in 1950; it
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, and then it
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decrease till 110
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citizens in 2050.
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