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The graph below describes rainfall statistics for somecountry.

The line graph demonstrates the amount of rainfall for the twelve month period in 2004. It can be clearly seen that the month of February got the lowest rainfall and October recorded the highest. According to the graph, among the month of January to September, the second month was significantly the shortest rainfall ever had in 2004. Rain had slightly increased in March with approximately 38 mm and happened more frequently in the next month (40 mm). Raindrops had occurred lots of times with similar amount of rainfall in May and June (about 48 mm) and got a more remarkable record of 60 mm rainfall in the next two months. On the other hand, in the ninth month of the year, there was a sudden decline in the occurrence of rainfall. The peak value was recorded in October with 65 mm and all the remaining last two months had lower figures: 60 mm in November and 55 mm in December. To sum up, the figures for most months are relatively uniform and change from 38 to 55 mm, with rare exceptions such as the months of July, August, October and November.
The line graph demonstrates the amount of
rainfall
for the twelve
month
period in 2004. It can be
clearly
seen
that the
month
of February
got
the lowest
rainfall
and October recorded the highest.

According to the graph, among the
month
of January to September, the second
month
was
significantly
the shortest
rainfall
ever had in 2004. Rain had
slightly
increased in March with approximately 38 mm and happened more
frequently
in the
next
month
(40 mm). Raindrops had occurred lots of times with similar amount of
rainfall
in May and June (about 48 mm) and
got
a more remarkable record of 60 mm
rainfall
in the
next
two
months
.
On the other hand
, in the ninth
month
of the year, there was a sudden decline in the occurrence of rainfall.

The peak value
was recorded
in October with 65 mm and all the remaining last two
months
had lower figures: 60 mm in November and 55 mm in December.

To sum up, the figures for most
months
are
relatively
uniform and
change
from 38 to 55 mm, with rare exceptions such as the
months
of July, August, October and November.
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IELTS academic The graph below describes rainfall statistics for somecountry.

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