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the diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured

The diagram demonstrates how instant noodles are produced by various machines in a factory. It is clear that the production of instant noodles consists of 8 main automated stages. Looking at more details, we can see that, in the first stage, flour is stored in storage soils and then are taken into a mixer. Water, oil, and flour are mixed in the mixer and are turned into dough sheets by rollers. In the fourth step, dough strips are made from dough sheets with the help of complex machines that are in the line. Furthermore, noodles discs are produced, which need to be cooked with hot oil and then be dried. In the packaging step, cooked dried noodles are put into the cups; then, vegetables and spices are also added to make it more delicious. Finally, in the eighth step, cups are labeled and sealed and are ready for the further process.

The diagram demonstrates how instant You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
are produced
 by various machines in a factory.

It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that the production of instant You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
 consists of 8 main automated stages.

Looking at more This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
, we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 that, in the first
 stage, flour is stored
 in storage soils and then are taken
 into a mixer. Water, oil, and flour are mixed
 in the mixer and are turned
 into dough sheets by rollers. In the fourth step, dough strips are made
 from dough sheets with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 of complex machines that are in the line. Furthermore
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
 discs are produced
, which need to be cooked
 with hot oil and then be dried
. In the packaging step, cooked dried You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
are put
 into the cups; then, vegetables and spices are also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 it more delicious.

Finally
, in the eighth step, cups are labeled
 and sealed and are ready for the further
 process. 