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The chart below shows the value of one county's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.

The bar graph illustrates the country's export value in various categories during 2015 and 2016 whereas, the table represents the percentage change in the export in 2016 compared to 2015. There are a total of five categories namely petroleum products, engineered goods, gems and jewelry, agricultural products, and textiles. The petroleum product had an increase in 2016 by 3%, in 2015 it was around 61 billion which rose up to 63%. The rise in engineered goods was around 8. 5%, the value in 2015 was around 58 billion and in 2016 it was around 62 billion. There is a drop of 5. 18% in gems and jewelry value in 2016. It was near to 44 billion which dropped to 41 billion. Agricultural products had the least increase of 0. 81% whereas there is a significant increase in textiles value which is 15. 24%. In the year 2015, the agricultural product was at 31 billion and it increased to 31. 2 billion. Meanwhile, textiles had a major change, in 2015 it was 27 billion and in 2016 it went up to 31 billion.
The bar graph illustrates the country's export
value
in various categories during 2015 and 2016 whereas, the table represents the percentage
change
in the export in 2016 compared to 2015. There are a total of five categories
namely
petroleum
products
, engineered
goods
, gems and jewelry, agricultural
products
, and textiles. The petroleum
product
had an increase in 2016 by 3%, in 2015 it was
around
61
billion
which rose up to 63%. The rise in engineered
goods
was
around
8. 5%, the
value
in 2015 was
around
58
billion
and in 2016 it was
around
62
billion
. There is a drop of 5. 18% in gems and jewelry
value
in 2016. It was near to 44
billion
which dropped to 41
billion
. Agricultural
products
had the least increase of 0. 81% whereas there is a significant increase in textiles
value
which is 15. 24%. In the year 2015, the agricultural
product
was at 31
billion and
it increased to 31. 2
billion
. Meanwhile, textiles had a major
change
, in 2015 it was 27
billion
and in 2016 it went up to 31
billion
.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the value of one county's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

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