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The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The line graph compares wheat exports from 1985 to 1990(in million tonnes) in Australia, Canada and European Community. It is clear that the number of wheat exports in Canada showed the highest level of fluctuation. By contrast, the situation for the figure for Australia and European Community was relative steadily. In more detail, in terms of Canada, the number of wheat exports was approximately 19(in million tonnes) in 1985. This figure witnessed a slightly decrease to 17 in the next following year. Then it rose significantly, reaching 25 in 1988, but the situation was reversed in the next year, when it declined dramatically to only 14 before climbing to 18 in the finally year. As for Australia and European Community, the number of wheat exports in these two countries were 15(in million tonnes) and 17 respectively in 1985. The figure for wheat exports for the former was followed by about 1 ascend in 1986, while that for the latter’s exports saw a noticeable descend, reaching 14. In the next 4 years, the number of wheat exports fell slowly to 12 in 1990. However, the same period had witnessed a pronounced growth in the figure for European Community’s wheat exports.

The line graph compares You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgrasscereal
wheat
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshipdumpsmuggletransport
exports
 from 1985 to 1990(in Use “a million” or use a number before ‘million’.a million
million
 tonnes) in Australia, Canada and European Community.

It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgrasscereal
wheat
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshipdumpsmuggletransport
exports
 in Canada This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
 the highest level of fluctuation. By contrast, the situation for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpricecharacterratenumbersymbolamount
figure
 for Australia and European Community was relative steadily
.

In more detail, in terms of Canada, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgrasscereal
wheat
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshipdumpsmuggletransport
exports
 was approximately 19(in Use “a million” or use a number before ‘million’.a million
million
 tonnes) in 1985. This You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpricecharacterratenumbersymbolamount
figure
 witnessed a You used an adverb (‘slightly’) instead of an adjective, or a noun (‘decrease’) instead of another adjective.slight decrease
slightly decrease
 to 17 in the next
 following year. Then it rose significantly
, reaching 25 in 1988, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the situation was reversed
 in the next
 year, when it declined dramatically
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 14 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 climbing to 18 in the You used an adverb (‘finally’) instead of an adjective, or a noun (‘year’) instead of another adjective.final year
finally year
.

As for Australia and European Community, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgrasscereal
wheat
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshipdumpsmuggletransport
exports
 in these two countries were 15(in Use “a million” or use a number before ‘million’.a million
million
 tonnes) and 17 respectively
 in 1985. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpricecharacterratenumbersymbolamount
figure
 for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgrasscereal
wheat
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshipdumpsmuggletransport
exports
 for the former was followed
 by about 1 ascend in 1986, while that for the latter’s You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshipdumpsmuggletransport
exports
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 a noticeable descend, reaching 14. In the next
 4 years, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgrasscereal
wheat
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshipdumpsmuggletransport
exports
 fell slowly
 to 12 in 1990. However
, the same period had witnessed a pronounced growth in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpricecharacterratenumbersymbolamount
figure
 for European Community’s You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgrasscereal
wheat
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshipdumpsmuggletransport
exports
. 