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The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The provided chart illustrate the overage thirty days climate in three different cities London, New York, Sydney. While, the given table summaries sum of annual hours of sunshine in those town. Overall, Sydney's temperature stays higher in the beginning and ending of a year. Whereas, other two remain less than 10 degree. However, New York as well as sydney have sunshine for more than 2000 hours. Though, Londin has probably 1200 hours. To embark with, all over the chart the highest temperature is of New York by 30°, even the lowest is of the same city by 5°. Additionally, Sydney's climate interconnect with both the town's weather couple of time in different months. First, with New York before the end of april at 20°, then again in late september at the same temperature. Second, accompanied by London kinks of around first week of may, besides in september once more time cross cach other, however both time climate remain similar of probably 20°c.

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given
 table summaries sum of annual hours of sunshine in those town.

Overall
, Sydney's temperature stays higher in the beginning and ending of a year. “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Whereas
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