The graph below compares the number of visits to two new music sites on the web<strong>. </strong> v.2
The graph below compares the number of visits to two new music sites on the web<strong>. </strong> v. 2
The line graph compares visitors to two music websites which were recently launched online. In general, the number of visitors to these websites fluctuated but after day 11, both sites received a higher number of visitors. Besides, more people visited pop parade music site than they did to the music choice site.
According to the diagram, pop parade music website was visited by 120 thousand people on the first day, whereas music choice got 40 thousand browsers on the same day. During the first week, pop parade’s visitor count showed an overall downward trend and on day seven both sites received roughly over 20 thousand visitors. However, overall visitors in the first week to the pop parade was significantly greater than that of music choice. Interestingly, visitors to pop parade site overwhelmingly increased after day 9 and it witnessed a great hike in the number of visitors on day 11 with around 150 thousand users. On this day, the other site was browsed by only over 20 thousand people. With a sharp dip on day 12 and 13, pop parade’s visitors went as high as 170 thousand on day 15. Music choice, on the contrary, accumulated the highest hits on day 12 and 14, which was around 120 thousand a day.
The line graph compares
visitors
to two
music
websites which were recently launched online.
In general
, the number of
visitors
to these websites fluctuated
but
after day 11, both
sites
received a higher number of
visitors
.
Besides
, more
people
visited pop
parade
music
site
than they did to the
music
choice
site.
According to the diagram, pop
parade
music
website
was visited
by 120 thousand
people
on the
first
day, whereas
music
choice
got
40 thousand browsers on the same day. During the
first
week, pop
parade’s
visitor
count
showed
an
overall
downward trend and on day seven both
sites
received roughly over 20 thousand
visitors
.
However
,
overall
visitors
in the
first
week to the pop
parade
was
significantly
greater than that of
music
choice
.
Interestingly
,
visitors
to pop
parade
site
overwhelmingly
increased after day 9 and it witnessed a great hike in the number of
visitors
on day 11 with around 150 thousand users. On this day, the other
site
was browsed
by
only
over 20 thousand
people
. With a sharp dip on day 12 and 13, pop
parade’s
visitors
went as high as 170 thousand on day 15.
Music
choice
,
on the contrary
, accumulated the highest hits on day 12 and 14, which was around 120 thousand a day.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
31Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes